After having presented my PowerPoint Presentation to the rest of my class based on my Summer Research Task, I was given feedback in things that went well and things that I could have improved on.
...Class feedback on my Presentation...
...What Went Well...
* I didn't read off the board, which allowed me to elaborate on the points made.
* I kept within the 5 minute timeframe.
...Even Better If...
* I slowed down when speaking and used pauses within my speech.
...Mr Bush's feedback on my Presentation...
...What Went Well...
* I explained why I chose to do my Summer Research Task based on Evan Almighty, which as a result allowed my classmates to understand the reason as to why I had made that decision.
* I spoke very fluently and was well rehearsed .i.e. I knew what to say and when to say it.
* I had excellent slides of which I elaborated on well, as a result showing my understanding of the text.
* I covered most of the key concepts.
* I had good use of media terminology .i.e. conglomerates, generic conventions, primary/secondary audience.
* I had an introduction and conclusion.
* I had good concept flow which allowed me to have a comprehensive presentation.
* I referred to theorists .i.e. Propp's character theory, and Lévi Strauss' theory of binary oppositions and the 3 media platforms learnt within AS Media Studies.
...Even Better If...
* I improved my expression and varied the tone of my voice.
* I referred to the key concept of media values and ideologies which would allow others to know the reasons behind the making of the film.
...Blog Feedback...
* I had the poster, and trailer embedded within my blog.
* I used a range of images.
* I included my own research on the text .i.e. reviews, and interviews.
* I included the review from the "Guardian" Newspaper.
Significance = 1/5
Structure = 1/5
Simplicity = 1/5
Rehearsal = 2/5
Final Score = 5/20
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